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In my heartbreak

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I am at the beginning and she pushed me out in the end

should I keep trying or die
inside should I have faith in all the lies

will this madness never end

as I cried and cried and tried to cope
my friends just say I am a dope
and even when I try to hope
there is no hope


so I kept trying
eachtime I kept dying
so I am bruised
and ending up confused

in myself and the world I dont strife
or maybe im that kind of girl
that doesnt try hard enough and want to fall
out of life


I will just keep crying
because I am dying
no more fighting
there is no loving

left
it should lead me to my death
and the one that  has gone wrong
falls along(the path)
just the song by Eyes set to kill called Where we started inspired me to write this the song reminded me of my girl in which I wanted but I couldnt have.

rhyme sceme is
a b b a
a a b b
a a b b


Im going to rant a bit here
By the way I am a girl too so I am gay she must not be I guess its sad really how I tried I wrote poetry and primped but she didnt even noticed Oh well maybe I am not beautiful enough to anyone anymore I am not even loved by my family just cared about by three people I know I wish I had someone who loved me because all my family cares about is working on schoolwork rather than the person themselfs


but on a more positive note I found this great site called rhymezone.com that helps me with my poetry now
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